Score: 7

"Nice."

submission: Mario visits Jump!! v0.3

date: July 6, 2009

It was pretty good. A longer story would be nice. You don't really need many more characters though. And while some music, would be nice in the future, it wasn't too missed in this film.

I have three suggestions on how you could make this better.

1 In the first world, the Mario sprite seems a little too big compared to everything else. It would be nice if you could make him smaller.

2 He also jumps through one of the blocks in the first world. It just seems kind of unnatural.

3 Mario's jumping is also a little unnatural in and of itself. In the second world it seems to me like it would look more natural for him to jump to each platform instead of just the middle ones.

Anyway, pretty good overall, It would be nice to see a sequel of some sort to see how it turns out.

Score: 7

"Very good."

submission: My Uni flash

date: July 6, 2009

My only suggestion is to get rid of the white bars on both sides of the screen.

Score: 10

"This is your first flash?"

submission: Samurai Cat

date: July 6, 2009

... MORE, MORE, YOU MUST GIVE US MORE.

This movie is perfection on all levels. I expect great things from you. This is a damn good movie, well worth the watch. Good job.