It was ok.
The animating was pretty good, and the jokes were funny. But I didn't like the music. It felt too fast paced for the animation. Navi's voice was also a little too annoying. I think a simple "Look" or "Hey, Listen!" was really all the flash needed. The repetition also got a little annoying. I think this flash would have been just fine if you had only used one of the jokes. Overall, not too bad but it's not anything too special.
Too fast for the animation how? I timed the animation to the music... But yeah, this is nothing amazing. I actually predicted a score of 3.62 before submitting it. Honestly, that's the most it deserves. There's no way something like this can compete with instant classics like Final Fantasy A+ or Super Smash.
Ha ha ha ha.
Well animated and completely random. This is what the average flash should be.
So bad, it's not bad.
This animation is horrible, but it's to the point where it has a certain charm to it.
Not bad.
I liked how the animation matched the audio. It seemed to combine the sarcastic humor of today, with animation that had a 1950's feel. It's a nice little short.
Nice.
It was pretty good. A longer story would be nice. You don't really need many more characters though. And while some music, would be nice in the future, it wasn't too missed in this film.
I have three suggestions on how you could make this better.
1 In the first world, the Mario sprite seems a little too big compared to everything else. It would be nice if you could make him smaller.
2 He also jumps through one of the blocks in the first world. It just seems kind of unnatural.
3 Mario's jumping is also a little unnatural in and of itself. In the second world it seems to me like it would look more natural for him to jump to each platform instead of just the middle ones.
Anyway, pretty good overall, It would be nice to see a sequel of some sort to see how it turns out.
Very good.
My only suggestion is to get rid of the white bars on both sides of the screen.
The white bars arnt in the finished movie...no idea wa happnd tbh :/
This is your first flash?
... MORE, MORE, YOU MUST GIVE US MORE.
This movie is perfection on all levels. I expect great things from you. This is a damn good movie, well worth the watch. Good job.
Good.
It's very good, but could you change the sound of the fireworks so there are different sounds. The same loop gets annoying after the first few times.
Funny.
The lip syncing could use a little work. If you could get it a little better, it would add to the flash.
Short, sweet and simple.
For what it is, and what it's mean to be, it's pretty decent. It's worth the time to watch that it took away from me.
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